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.ry.C.
Nov 23, 2006 7:50:04 GMT -5
Post by raksha on Nov 23, 2006 7:50:04 GMT -5
Raksha
Birthed a male
Grown 5 virtues
Sketched of Blood bay
Molded of Purest arabian
Risen to 15.3hands
Pathed that of Neutral
Affiliated to no on..have none
Personality worked as Silent, slightly regretting his past, loving caring, and demanding to his own life, fearful now of making the wrong move with mares yet confindent in his actions, strong and powerful, wise yet so young knowing the things that elders taught by foolish mistakes...He is a dominant male by nature and very possessive...Doesn't take to other stags very lightly...
His history is simple like this A princess was born, forced to mary a prince she didn't love. He forced his child into her she killed herself after it was born. The stallion abused it then kicked it out of the castle. That foal became known as Raksha loner of the moon...he found love with a mare called 'Redmoon' she was her lead. He had a bady history with mares so far but he doesn't care. Something happened and he abandonded her in a dire situation and now here he was after that. Regretting and pondering on what he'd done..trying to restart a better life..
Sample::
Was this really happening? right before my eyes the murder of my family. I lifted my hands to my cheeks eyes wide with terrror and screamed. Blood shot out my ears with the effort. Ya I wish, thats all I wanted to do right now...scream.. Done/not done
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.ry.C.
Nov 23, 2006 13:36:14 GMT -5
Post by Darius on Nov 23, 2006 13:36:14 GMT -5
Looks good, except.... He has no affiliation? He's not good or evil? If so, just put neutral.
After that's taken care of, he's accepted.
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.ry.C.
Nov 24, 2006 0:10:47 GMT -5
Post by raksha on Nov 24, 2006 0:10:47 GMT -5
I redid the post!!
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.ry.C.
Nov 24, 2006 0:27:16 GMT -5
Post by Darius on Nov 24, 2006 0:27:16 GMT -5
Awesome, thanks. Accepted, and welcome
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